Alright, first off I would like to tell you why this took so long... I had to keep up with Quake too, if not I would have been terrible.
There might be a few flaws, for example... timing is off with the music and the player names are out of position. I can't fix these, It shouldn't affect the movie at all really but sorry there is nothing I could do to fix it on this slow computer (everything lags in the program and seems synced).
Omg u got my nickname wrong FFFFUUUUU TIHS MOOVEE SUKX!
On a serious note, as being mentioned above this movie feels a lot like any other movie out there. Which is not a bad thing considering this is your first.
Things to improve:
Flow - More often than not the video doesn't keep up with the music intensity, feels out of tune.
Custom frag messages - Not a bad idea, really, but should be used (or not used) consistantly.
Config - Should also be more consistant. Some parts have different post-processing settings.
Overused music - Self-explanatory. Not saying you should go for absolutely unique feel every time, but at least avoid using something that was in another frag vid.